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Notes on Joel Shurkin's book

Chapter 1
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5	last p	It would be better to use a period insteat of a semicolon, 
both for emphasis and to remove the indefnite antecedent problem in the
next sentence.

13	9	Fibonacci was not his original name but meant ``son of Nacci''
Shouldn't you mention this?

14	4	Replace first `by' by `of' numbers by.

14  last line	Move final word to the left.

15   	I doubt this, since a checker board was always called a draughts board.

19	p beginning, The idea why...  `and' for `but' in `but the slide r'.

21	Why not start using calculator instead of computer or at least explain.

28 	Why hyphen in next to last line?


Chapter 2

40	6 from bottom  `and' on games of chance